Showing posts with label Quinity. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Quinity. Show all posts

Sunday, October 17, 2010

The Quinity Saga

Copyright © 2008 of James Pettis, III

The Quinity Saga is a spin-off of the David Poral Series and continues where David Poral left off. The Quinity Saga takes place two years after the events of David Poral and the Oricals. This series covers the Porals as they get there aliases and their Emblems of Power. This series also consists of Ten stories (like the David Poral Series): Quinity, The Quinity Saga: Puppet Vixen, The Quinity Saga: The Banshee, The Quinity Saga: The Twisted Circus Date, The Quinity Saga: The Carnival of Death, The Quinity Saga: The Revenge of Marvin, The Quinity Saga: The Vampires, The Quinity Saga: The Rising End, The Quinity Saga: The Final Battle, and David Poral and the Jazz Club Murder (a special story). All of these stories will also have their own archives soon. The Quinity Saga will also be getting it's own page.

After reuniting with his siblings, the Porals are in for their biggest battle yet. Two years have passed since the events of David Poral and the Oricals. David is now more mature and him an Rick are best of buds, Rick lives on his own, Rava has a new job as a journalist, and Mark and Matt have been away traveling the world for the past two years. The Porals have had a two year break from demons, creatures, witches, and warlocks and are about to return to Super School (the School closed down for remodeling). The five receive a letter from their father's mother and go to her house to retrieve the Crystal of Protection, the Compass of Strength, the Topaz of Grace, the Cross of Faith, and the Pendant of Peace (which their father had set aside for them for the future). With these, the five can unleash their aliases Uno (David), Duo (Rick), Tria (Rava), Quado (Mark), and Quint (Matt) and form their Superhero team. And with the Poral's powers growing stronger everyday, they have almost reached their ultimate power... the Power of Five as One... Quinity. But as The Red Ninth rises, will they reach their power before it's too late?

This series also consists of Christian values and a Supernatural series in one. This is the last series in the David Poral / The Quinity Saga series and it has several twists, untold secrets, and unexpected turns. Stay tuned for more info about The Quinity Saga.

Sunday, October 3, 2010

David Poral: Rick-O-Demon

Copyright © 2008 of James Pettis, III

David Poral: Rick-O-Demon is one of my David Poral short stories that I'm going to be posting today. It is eleven pages long (written) and is about Rick being copied by a shadow demon to fool David and kill him. Luckily, Rava comes home just in time to help David with this shadowy green slime spitting creature.









DAVID PORAL
RICK-O-DEMON











By James A. Pettis, III
© Copyright 2008








One night, RICK comes out of his class room with his suitcase in his hand and leaves out of the high school building. RICK goes to his car and puts his suitcase in the passenger's seat. RICK walks to the driver's seat when the screen gets shaky and something knocks RICK over on the ground.

RICK
Ugh... (sigh) nice, I just got this suit dry cleaned.

RICK gets up and a shadow-like figure with yellow eyes was standing by him. The figure grabs RICK's neck and blows black smoke in his face.

SHADOW FIGURE
DIE!!!!!

RICK drops to the ground. Soon after, the SHADOW FIGURE looks at RICK. Suddenly, the SHADOW FIGURE turns into RICK. Later, RICK (SHADOW) ties RICK up with RICK's dress shirt and duck tapes his mouth closed.

RICK (SHADOW)
That should shut you up.

RICK
Mmm... mmm...

RICK (SHADOW)
If the black smoke wasn't strong enough to kill you... you can suffocate.

RICK (SHADOW) waves his hand and RICK appears in the trunk of the car. RICK (SHADOW) slams the trunk and gets in the car. He starts the car and drives off. Meanwhile, at the PORAL's Household, DAVID is sitting at a table in the attic reading a Super School book next to a stack of more books.

DAVID
Finished...

DAVID closes the book and puts it on the table.

DAVID
That would make the sixth book I've read today. Since I don't have a life unlike Rick, Rava, Mark, and Matt who all have jobs and things of that nature.

Meanwhile, outside of the house, RICK (SHADOW) is standing by the door holding RICK's suit jacket and suitcase. he opens the door and hangs his jacket on the door hook, puts down his suitcase, and begins to walk up the stairs to the attic. Meanwhile, RAVA is driving back to the PORAL's House when she hears RICK's voice call out to her.

RICK (O.S)
Rava... help me...

RAVA
What?

RICK (O.S.)
David... is in... trouble...

RAVA pulls her cell phone out and begins to call DAVID's cell. Back at the PORAL's House, David starts to read another book when his cell phone rings. DAVID puts down the book and picks up his phone and answers it.

DAVID
Hello?

RAVA
David, are you at home?

DAVID
Yeah, where else would I be? You know the only thing I do is read books 24/7. I should've kept my job at Stay Inn... but I guess it was going to close down eventually anyway right?

RAVA
Uhh... OK, Rick contacted me.

DAVID
On the phone or with twin telepathy?

RAVA
You know what I mean.

DAVID
Why would he contact you telepathically?

RAVA
He said that you he needed help and that you were in trouble.

RICK walks into the attic with his hand in his pocket.

DAVID
Did he mean he needed help walking up the stairs? 'Cause he just walked into the attic and we're fine both fine.

RAVA
OK... just be careful.

DAVID
I will.

DAVID hangs up the phone and looks at RICK (SHADOW).

 DAVID
Is everything OK Rick? Rava said you contacted her.

RICK (SHADOW)
No, I didn't contact her and I'm fine.

RICK (SHADOW) looks at DAVID and smirks.

RICK (SHADOW)
So what are you doing up here?

DAVID
Well, having nothing to do I've been reading Super School all day.

RICK (SHADOW)
That's good.

RICK (SHADOW) walks closer to DAVID.

RICK (SHADOW)
I am... so hungry.

DAVID is checking off books that he had read on a list.

DAVID
There's some food from earlier in the refrigerator.

RICK
That's not what I meant. I meant I'm hungry to kill.

DAVID stops checking the list and looks at RICK.

DAVID
What?

RICK (SHADOW) looks at DAVID as green slime begins to drip out of his mouth and skin. Soon after, his skin gets gray and zombie like as DAVID bucks his eyes.

RICK (SHADOW)
What's wrong? Scared?!

RICK's (SHADOW) eyes turn yellow. RICK (SHADOW) jumps over the table to attack DAVID when he orbs away. RAVA comes through the front door and hangs up her jacket on a hook.

RAVA
David!!!

Upstairs, DAVID is running away from RICK (SHADOW) as they run down the hallway. RICK (SHADOW) spit green slime out of his mouth.

DAVID
Aaahh!!!

DAVID orbs away with a red glow as the slime shoots towards him and it hits the wall.

RICK (SHADOW)
NO!!!!!

DAVID reappears with a red glow in the living room.

RAVA
What's going on?

RICK (SHADOW) runs down the stairs.

DAVID
Behind the couch!

DAVID and RAVA dash behind the couch as RICK (SHADOW) throws a fire ball at the couch. DAVID and RAVA hold hands and they teleport upstairs in the hallway. Suddenly, RICK (SHADOW) dashes down the hallway and grabs DAVID.

DAVID
Hey!!!

RICK (SHADOW) throws DAVID out of the window into the front yard.

RAVA
Oh no.

RAVA looks at RICK (SHADOW) and runs down the stairs. Outside, DAVID was getting up as RAVA runs outside. Suddenly, RICK (SHADOW) bursts out of the house.

DAVID
Uh oh...

DAVID backs into RICK's car and his eyes turn pure white. DAVID saw RICK being tied up and in the trunk of his car. DAVID's eyes turn back to normal.

DAVID
Rick...

RICK (SHADOW) dashes towards DAVID and RAVA. DAVID waves his hand and RICK (SHADOW) flies into the house.

DAVID
Rick's in his trunk.

DAVID and RAVA open RICK's trunk and see him tied up. DAVID and RAVA get him out and untie him.

RAVA
So you did contact me.

RICK
Yeah, I did.

DAVID
No time to chat, we have a Shadow Stealer to kill.

RICK and RAVA
Shadow Stealer?!

DAVID
Yes, they copy your shadow and your look to kill people you know. (while smiling big) I read about  them today.

Suddenly, RICK (SHADOW) gets up and dashes towards DAVID, RICK, and RAVA. The screen blanks out and the Across Oval, the Straight Oval, and the Square appears on the screen aligning to create the Trinity symbol. The screen comes back and the Trinity symbol appears under DAVID, RICK, and RAVA.

DAVID, RICK, and RAVA
Trinity!!!

A green blast shot out of their hands when they put them out towards RICK (SHADOW). Soon after, the blast hits RICK (SHADOW).

RICK (SHADOW)
Noooo!!!!!!!!!

RICK (SHADOW) disintegrates into slime on the ground.

DAVID
Whoa...

DAVID, RICK, and RAVA walk over to the spot that RICK (SHADOW) was vanquished in.

RICK
Thanks guys...

RAVA
No problem, that's what family is for.

DAVID
Let's go inside.

DAVID, RICK, and RAVA go inside of the house and close the door.

THE END


That was fun! Anyway, what do you guys think of "David Poral: Rick-O-Demon?" Please leave a comment and let me know!



Friday, October 1, 2010

David Poral Series - Main Cast

Copyright © 2010 of James Pettis, III

David Poral as I said before is the first series I came up with, so it's very dear to me. Now I'm about to tell you the Main Cast of David Poral and who I'd like to portray them. The five Porals (David, Rick, Rava, Mark, and Matt) have various abilities and powers that I will also be posting (along with their power symbols and aliases). Note: Their power symbols are symbols from the Quinity symbol (picture below) that represent their unique abilities.

Copyright © 2007 of James Pettis, III



DAVID PORAL
Full Name: David Nathan Poral
Sex: Male
Age: 15-18, 20-21, and 22-24
Personality: Outgoing, Helpful, Stubborn at times, and Sensitive.
Abilities: Levitation, Orbing, Healing, Cloning Himself, Visions, Flying, Mind reading, Can see things faraway, Sensing, and Changing into other people.
Weakness: Water (He can't swim) and Loud noises.
Quinity Position: Leader
David's Goal in Life: To avenge his father
Quinity Abilities: Uno Blast, Manipulation of Time, and Ultimate Uno Blast (as Ultimate Uno).
Alias: Uno and Ultimate Uno
Quinity Symbol: The Square
Transformation Emblem: The Crystal of Protection


Copyright © 2007 of James Pettis, III

David Poral is a young superhero in training going to Super School. David has a very helpful and outgoing, but he's also stubborn at times. David is the youngest of the Porals, but is the leader of Quinity. David is also very knowledgeable of demons, witches, and other supernatural creatures. Rick (his older brother) was very skeptical about David being the leader; but as they all grow closer to each other, Rick is more accepting to the fact that David was the chosen one to lead. David is very close to Mark and Matt (since they are a little closer in age) and they usually find themselves in messes together. David is very mature for his age, not getting into things that his peers get into.


RICK PORAL
Full Name: Rick Drew Poral
Sex: Male
Age: 21-24, 26-27, and 28-30
Personality: Easygoing, Laid back, Angers easily, and very Stubborn.
Abilities: Healing, Exploding things, Flying, X-ray vision, Super strength, and Pain sensing.
Weakness: Silver acid
Quinity Position: First member
Rick's Goal in Life: To Protect the ones he loves
Quinity Abilities: Twinity (with Rava)
Alias: Duo
Quinity Symbol: The Across Oval
Transformation Emblem: The Compass of Strength


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Rick Poral is a young man that attends Super School with his twin sister Rava. Rick is easygoing and laid back, but he angers very easily and is stubborn. Rick is the oldest of the Porals and the only one out of all five that took the longest to accept his new destiny (when Quinity reunited). Rick did not like the fact that his new little brother was the leader of Quinity, and does not go along with the groups plans easily. But after a series of events, Rick's personality changes, and he accepts David as the leader and they become close.


RAVA PORAL
Full Name: Rava Marie Poral
Sex: Female
Age: 21-24, 26-27, and 28-30
Personality: Outgoing, Romantic, and Bubbly.
Abilities: Healing, Exploding things, Flying, and Terror sensing.
Weakness: Smoke
Quinity Position: Second member
Rava's Goal in Life: To Protect the world
Quinity Abilities: Twinity (with Rick)
Alias: Tria
Quinity Symbol: The Straight Oval
Transformation Emblem: The Topaz of Grace


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Rava Poral is a young woman that attends Super School with her twin brother Rick. Rava is very outgoing and bubbly, but can sometimes be feisty. Rava is the second oldest of the Porals (Rick came out first) and was the first to really embrace David as her little brother. Rava disliked the fact that Rick was skeptical of David's skills and abilities (because of his knowledge about demons, witches, and other creatures); but once they began to get along, she is glad.


MARK PORAL
Full Name: Mark Monte Poral
Sex: Male
Age: 19-21, 24-25, and 26-28
Personality: Quiet, Helpful, and very Sensitive.
Abilities: Mind reading, Can crush things with the twist of his wrist, Flying, and Sadness sensing.
Weakness: Heat (Fire)
Quinity Position: Third member
Mark Goal in Life: To defeat evil doers
Quinity Abilities: Intense hearing
Alias: Quado
Quinity Symbol: The Diagonal Oval Uno
Transformation Emblem: The Cross of Faith


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Mark Poral is young man that attends Super School with his fraternal twin brother Matt. Mark is very quiet, sensitive, and slightly insecure, but he is also helpful. Mark is the first middle child (He came out first) and was excepting to the fact that Rick, Rava, and David were his siblings (along Matt). Mark doesn't like how Rick acts towards David, but he doesn't say anything. As he matures, he gets more secure in himself and speaks his mind.


MATT PORAL
Full Name: Matt Damien Poral
Sex: Male
Age: 19-21, 24-25, and 26-28
Personality: Outgoing, Helpful, and Talkative
Abilities: Mind reading, Can crush things with the twist of his wrist, Running fast, Flying, and Stress sensing.
Weakness: Poison acid
Quinity Position: fourth member
Mark Goal in Life: To save people he cares about
Quinity Abilities: Intense hearing
Alias: Quint
Quinity Symbol: The Diagonal Oval Dos
Transformation Emblem: The Pendant of Peace


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Matt Poral is a young man that attends Super School with his fraternal twin brother Mark. Matt is very talkative and outgoing, he can also be confrontational at times. Matt is the fourth member of Quinity and is the second middle child. Matt was excepting of his new siblings and is very close with David and Mark. Rick and Matt occasionally get into it because of how Rick treats David, but once Rick and David start to get along better, Matt and Rick also bond more.




Well, there you have it, the Main Cast of David Poral. Stay tuned because I will be posting short David Poral stories soon!

Saturday, August 28, 2010

David Poral Series

Copyright © 2010 of James Pettis, III 

David Poral is the first series I created, therefore it is very dear to me. I have gone through a lot with this series as far as whether I would do it or not, first David was a warlock, now he has supernatural powers and is a superhero. With this series I've created two spin-offs Aqua Lights and The Quinity Saga (David Poral - Part II), which can be found in it's on separate archive. The David Poral series will also be getting it's own page.

David Poral is a fifteen-year-old with supernatural powers. He can fly, sense things, and has visions of the past, present, and future. David is excited because he is about to attend a school in Super City called Super School of the West. But, David finds out that the man he has been living with for fifteen years is not his father, he is an evil warlock named Salem Dark. David escapes as his final conversation with his grandmother ends fatally (she is vanquished by demons). David arrives at Super School after meeting four students, Rick and Rava (twin brother and sister) and Mark and Matt (fraternal twins). The five become very close as they go through the school year, until they find a book called the Book of Five, which releases a wave of light breaking an evil curse that they were under. The five are siblings, but were under a spell by Salem Dark (along with anyone who knew they were related) to prevent them from unleashing their ultimate power, Quinity. As they begin to unleash their new abilities, they find out things about there families past and begin to encounter an evil organization known as The Red Ninth. The Red Ninth is an Organization that will stop at nothing to reach their goal; to find the Garden of Eden and eat from the Tree of Life. David, Rick, Rava, Mark, and Matt must fight together and stop the Red Ninth from achieving their goal.

I love this series, it's a mixture of christian values and a supernatural series. The David Poral series also consists of Ten stories: David Poral and the Mirror of Lies, David Poral and the Zombie Parade, David Poral and the Recreation of Salem, David Poral and the Energy Charger, David Poral and the Seducing Witches, David Poral and the Switch Meister, David Poral and the Dragon of China, David Poral and the Merman of the Enchanted Sea, David Poral and the Oricals: Part I, and David Poral and the Oricals: Part II. All of these wonderful stories will also have their own archives soon. Stay tuned for short stories and other things about the David Poral Series.